为不断提升教学水平，提高教学质量，打造高水平出国语言培训品牌，每个月，新航道的老师们都会坐在一起探讨学生痛点问题、研究出切实有效的解决方案！

在这人间最美4月天，天津新航道的老师们针对雅思写作的考试趋势以及如何解决学生痛点问题进行了研讨！本次教研，产出干货满满，大家快跟小新一起看看吧~

新航道老师

日常出课步骤

季度雅思写作

考情分析

小作文各类题型出现次数：

地图题出现次数增加，老题重现要注意：

大作文社会类话题出现次数最多：

大作文九分达人原题出现：

评分标准再细化

 6分、7分评分差异

任务回应部分

回答问题；分段；观点；分论点；细节论证；结论

差异：

***细节论证不足，不清晰，太细（跑题）

eg：

online courses-convenient

online courses negative:  … sedentary lifestyle and harm eyesight. We all know that eyesight is important for our health.

逻辑连贯部分

观点一致；层层递进;  段与段；句与句；句子内部 

差异：

***论证 progression 层层递进 不能跳跃

eg：

I still believe that children should be educated at least 7 years old. As we all know little children have curiosity. Too early education cannot have much effect on them. They even don’t know how to focus on their study assignment. 

---they are curious about what they see, so they may be distracted easily in classes. 

***论证不清楚

eg：

修路缺点 Firstly, restoration is not an easy project. The government will put a lot of manpower and material resources into it. 

---government will have to put ...... 

修路缺点 It brings many troubles to residents, such as renting fees and traffic problem.

---such as having to rent a new house 

***句与句衔接

eg：

With accessible Internet connection, students now can study online courses at home. It helps us save time. 

---With accessible Internet connection, students now can study online courses at home. It helps them save time. 

人称一致

***句子内衔接

eg：

It’s cheaper to subscribe to a newspaper than to buy a newspaper in a newsstand. 

--- It’s cheaper to subscribe to a newspaper than to buy one in a newsstand. 

代词避免重复 one-单数 ones-复数

eg：

Violent films have less influence on copycat crimes than news reports have. 

--- violent films have less influence on copycat crimes than news reports do.

The figures for beef were 3 times as much as those for chicken. 

比较句用do/does/that/those等避免重复

eg：

Compared with the theoretical knowledge learned in classes, the skills developed through training are easier than that.  

--- Compared with the theoretical knowledge learned in classes, the skills developed through training are easier.

重复

词汇部分

准确，替换，地道

差异：

***准确-贴切-无歧义

eg：

Teachers cannot take care of young children like their parents do. Young children need special care because they are weak. 

--- because they are not physically strong enough. / they are physically vulnerable. 

eg：

Students aged over 7 have better ability to control themselves. 

--- Students aged over 7 have better self-discipline. 

***替换（range）

eg：

家务

housework - chores - domestic tasks 

犯罪

crime- criminal behavior - misconduct - delinquency 

***地道（style）

eg：

满足需求

meet/cover the need 

养家

support a family 

20% of water consumption goes to homes. 

eg：

让...能够

internet let/make students study online.

A enable B to do 

A allow B to do 

A make it possible for B to do 

语法部分

准确, 替换, 地道

差异：

***替换（range）

语法范围：简单句-简单从句（宾语从句，表语从句，定语从句，状语从句）-较复杂从句（主语从句，非限定性定语从句）-形式主语/宾语-倒装句/强调句-非谓语动词做定语和状语/伴随状语-被动句，插入语，名词化, 省略

形式主语

we should / we must… 

it is important for … to do 

形式宾语

Internet makes it easier for people to communicate with friends. 

非谓语动词做定语（doing, done, to do）

介词短语做定语：

people who have a diploma 

=people with a diploma

非谓语动词做状语（doing, done, to do）

when poeple are choosing a job, salary is the most important consideration. 

=when choosing a job,

if 状语从句替换: with/without/unless 

伴随状语 with +名词 

伴随状语 with + n + doing 

被动语态

中文省略了“被”字：学生们不允许使用手机students are not allowed to use cellphone.

不知道主语是谁 The window was broken. 

主语太多 Children should be encouraged to take part in outdoor activities. 

不强调主语 Children should be encouraged to develop their creativity. 

情态动词+被动语态

Steps can be taken to tackle the problem. 

插入语 

Some artists, for example, find it difficult to support themselves. 

名词化

He failed, and this made him lose his fortune and fame. （6分）

His failure made him lose his fortune and fame. （7分）

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