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新航道雅思学习会为您提供专业的听说读写四项培训,今天我们带来的是关于雅思写作的内容。在雅思写作中使用不同的语法结构很重要,因为许多烤鸭似乎会自动将“写作”等同于“大作文”。事实上,事实并非如此。在小作文的评分标准中,还有一个语法维度。如何写出一篇短文的复杂句子结构?让我们今天一起学习!
新航道雅思学习——雅思小作文评分标准
5分:仅能使用有限的语法结构→句式重复较多
6分:综合使用简单句式与复杂句式→可以使用一些简单句+复杂句
7分:运用各种复杂的语法结构→灵活使用,而不是一味使用最长、最难的句式
从评分标准里我们可以看出,想要得到6分及以上的评价,就得刻意去使用更多复杂的句型。
简单来说,简单句就是只有一套主谓的句子,比如:
John wanted a decent IELTS band score.
而复杂句型就包括从句、倒装、被动等各种句式,其实考官期待看到的复杂句型,和我们作为学习者理解的复杂句型,会有所出入。
新航道雅思学习——01连词
2008 pass rates in Business, Science and Maths and Engineering were considerably lower in 2008 than in 2012, so the greastest level of improvement took place in these disciplines(科目).
这种句式是利用连词将两个句子连接在一起,通常连词的用法没有什么限制,要注意的就是根据使用场景:
■ 表原因结果,连接宏观的规律和微观数据
■ 表转折让步,进行正反信息的对比
■ 表单纯并列,罗列若干同类信息
其它的连词还有and、or、although、because、while、whereas等,通过连词组成复杂句式是比较容易的手段,再举几个例子:
■ In contrast, the amount in Poland was 10 million initially, and then is increased slightly to 11 million before decreasing almost back to the figure in 1980, at 9.9 million.
■ Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams).
新航道雅思学习——02介词
At just over 80% in 2012 and 70% in 2018, averagepass rates among Computer Science students were by far the highest.
这种是用了介词,使得句子只用了一套主谓结构的同时,保留了两个信息点。其它推荐使用的介词还有in/on/from...to.../between/by/until/with/for/at等。
再感受一下其用法:
■ The percentage change between the two years was clearly the most marked for those studying Business,from a modest 20% in 2008 to a considerably higher level (50%) in 2012.
■ In 1979, beef was the most popular of these food, with about 225 grams per person per week.
新航道雅思学习——03定语从句
2008 pass rates in Business, Science, and Maths and Engineering were considerably lower in 2008 than in 2012, which means that the greatest level of improvement took place in these disciplines.
对,这就是同学们都爱使用的定语从句,也是很好的组成复杂句的手段之一:
■ People in Turkey spent on food, drinks and tobacco with the largest percentage, which was 32.14%.
■ In 2009, personal needs and unexpected problems were each cited by around 10% of people, both of which grew to around 20% ten years later.
新航道雅思学习——04宾语从句
The chart provides information about how many employees were away from work in three different years and the reasons given.
这个句型叫宾语从句,常见于小作文的开头段,通常在对题目进行改写时使用,其它的替换表达还有:The diagram/table/figure/illustration/graph + indicates/represents/shows/outlines...
比如:
■ The pie charts compare the distribution of water usage for different purposes among local residents during the period from 1988 to 2008.
■ The bar charts illustrates changes in the electricity rates in four states in Australia.
新航道雅思学习——05形式主语从句
It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.
这种句型叫形式主语从句,可以用来描述一些细节信息或者比较明显的特征,
同学们还可以写:It is obvious that.../It is interesting to note that... 等
■ It is also interesting to note that almost all showed a decrease in 1994 in amount of goods transported except for the pipeline, which actually peaked in that year.
新航道雅思学习——06There be句型
There is a sharp rise in the next hour to reach its maximum before collapsing again to a lower level by the end of the day.
用There be句型非常适合用来描写小作文中的客观数据,表示“有”或者“存在”的意思。
其它的例子还有:
■ There were no figures given for male part-time workers, but female part-time had forty hours of leisure time, only slightly more than women in full-time employment, perhaps reflecting their work in the home.
新航道雅思学习——07被动句
By 2005, the time needed to produce a car had descended to just 21 hours.
被动句也是小作文中很常用、且较易上手的复杂句式之一,当描述对象是物体或流程时经常用到,举几个例子:
■ Meanwhile, timber was the most popular product in 1980 but two decades later paper was produced more than the others.
■ By creating an enclosed(封闭的) environment, the lid(盖子) on the top must be closed so there would be no smoke letting out.
新航道雅思学习——08倒装句
After entering the venue, customers could see a cash desk on the right and in front of them were several round tables arranged in a circle.
倒装句也是适合使用的复杂句式之一,常用在地图题当中,比如:
■ In the southeast and west part were many shops opened along new roads on both sides.
■ In the west was a river running from north to south.
建议同学们如果想在考场上使用倒装句,私下练习时一定要确保句子的结构是正确的。
雅思小作文中的复杂句并不像大家想象的那么难,但我们不应该掉以轻心,犯太多错误。因此,我们建议学生可以模仿上面列出的句子,并练习一定的改写,看看自己擅长哪些句子,并在考场上发挥自己的优势!你还想学习哪些英语内容?你可以关注新航道雅思学习提供的内容。
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