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新航道雅思秋季培训:雅思写作要注重词汇的多样性

作者:  2024-08-20 18:55:20  阅读量:

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老师在批改雅思作文时,发现一个问题,那就是同样的单词在写作中不断出现,比如:'a lot of '/'humans'/'nowadays'/。

实际上用这些词汇并没错,但我们不要忘记了雅思写作评分标准之一【词汇的多样性】,如果可能的话,尽量避免过度使用这些单词来帮助你获得更好的词汇分数。

下面哪个句子看起来更学术?

1. A lot of people nowadays are shopping online, like using Amazon Prime to buy clothes and electronic goods.

2. A growing number of people in recent years tend to do their shopping online, such as using Amazon Prime to buy clothes and electronic goods.

答案:2。第二句更好的地方在于,它使用了'a growing number of '和'in recent years'的固定搭配,以及'tend to' 和'such as'。

另外,在写作举例时使用“like”一词会显得不够正式,建议使用“such as”或“namely”来给出简短的例子。

a lot of

1. A lot of people are working from home recently.

2. A significant number of people are working from home recently.

这两句话在语法上都是对的,但第二句相对更好,因为它使用了一个固定搭配。

以下时6组'a lot of'+可数名词的例句,大家可以学习学习它的固定搭配。

A growing number of people believe that A.i and robots will take their jobs in the near future.

A large number of wild animals are losing their natural habitats.

A large proportion of new cars have hybrid engines now.

A significant number of people are working from home recently.

More and more policymakers are concerned about the environment.

The Japanese government spent large sums of money on hosting the Olympics

By 2030, the vast majority of cars will be electric vehicles.

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humans

这是一个经常出现在错误语境中,且5-6分作文中常见的词汇。

'Humans'这个词语仅适用于在自然栖息地、环境等方面与其他物种进行比较的语境中,而不是在太空旅行或进化的语境中。

例如(自然环境场景):

Human activity, such as deforestation for the building of housing projects has had a detrimental effect on most species' natural habits.

It is highly likely that there will be human settlements on Mars by 2040.

Humans have evolved over thousands of years to speak many languages.

Genetically engineered humans is an immoral concept.

Of all the species, humans are considered the most intelligent.

在以下句子中,则需要将'humans'替换成'people'

People these days tend to depend too much on their smartphones.

People could be living on Mars in the next 20 years. (l can also use humans here)

More and more people are deciding to live a minimalist lifestyle now.

Most people are worried about the effect on the economy because of coronavirus lockdowns.

Many people would say that global warming is a scam to tax citizens and make profits from carbon taxes.

nowadays/these days

很多同学都喜欢用它来代替'recently'。但是建议大家根据场景使用:in recent decades/Currently/In recent times/In recent years,等短语。这样能更好的帮助我们拿到高分哟!

In recent times, many animals are close to extinction or are on the endangered list.

Currently, the vast majority of people are using the internet for studying online.

In recent months, the vast majority of people have been using the internet for studying online.

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