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新航道雅思秋季班:50组雅思写作中常用的高分表达

作者:  2024-08-06 11:39:59  阅读量:

专业的天津雅思秋季课程就选新航道雅思秋季班,天津新航道雅思秋季班火热招生中,走读班、VIP定制班、全封闭住宿班、线上班多种班型任您选择,现在报名立享优惠。今天新航道天津学校小编给大家总结了一下雅思写作高分技巧,并且还带来了50组写作高分表达,快快往下看看吧~
雅思写作拿高分,对很多考鸭来说都是一件很头疼的事情,但是,其实只要弄清几条写作上的规则,拿高分并没有那么难。

审题+提纲缺一不可

小编遇到过很多考鸭,觉得写作时间本来就紧张,于是拿到题目后,直接就下笔,有些甚至连题目要求都没看清楚就开始写了,这样其实是很危险的。

接下来这道题,小编会告诉你如果没有认真审题,会写出什么样的作文:

Some people believe that children should always have activities organized for them in their free time. Others believe that children themselves should choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

如果不好好审题,很有可能你就忽略了题目里discuss both views这一点,直接跳去写给出你自己的意见并论证。这样的题目需要我们对题目给出的两种观点都进行讨论,最后才给出自己的意见,如果不审好题,很有可能写出来的作文就不符合题目要求。

其次,里面的两个观点同学们也要仔细读懂。小编认为,如果你怕分不清两个观点,可以在草稿纸上用几个词总结一下,避免混淆。拟提纲是一个很好的写作习惯,无论你是纸考还是机考,有了一个提纲,你这篇文章写跑题的概率会大大降低,因为你有了一个具象的清晰思路,这会帮助你写出一篇优 秀的作文。

主题句+一二三,逻辑清晰

一篇好的雅思作文,无论是大作文还是小作文,主题句都少不了。有些同学也许觉得主题句的出现有些模式化,但主题句恰恰能帮助你的文章变得更清晰明了,所以小编建议,主题句不能省,每个段落你都要列出主题句。

这一点其实能够在我们列提纲的时候就做好。以上面那道题目为例,小编给你列一份提纲,同学们可以看看优质提纲长什么样:

第 一段,转述题目,说明这篇文章的大致要点。

第二段:本段说明活动组织的好坏(第 一,利用时间更有效;第二,有明确的学习目标;第三,提升孩子们的社交技巧。但过度组织活动可能会让孩子们感到压力和疲惫)

第三段:本段说明自由选择的好坏(第 一,孩子们有机会去自己发掘自己的兴趣;第二,锻炼孩子独立思考抉择的能力;第三,孩子们会交到志同道合的朋友。但自由选择若无大人引导容易出错)

第四段:总结,我认为应该两者结合,大人应该给他们提供适当的活动组织,但也要允许孩子们有自由选择的权利。

小编不是说你在考试时要写这么多字,但是这是一个可以参考的模式,你在列提纲的时候需要把每一段的主题以及论点一二三都列出来,这样方便你后续写作时保证逻辑清晰。

多实少虚,句式多变

这个规则乍一看有些懵,不要紧,小编会在这部分带着实例给大家说说看。以下这一段是之前那道作文题的优 秀作文节选,很好地反映了这条规则所需要的一切:

For instance, participation in sports clubs or arts classes not only refines specific skills but also fosters valuable social abilities. These structured engagements serve as platforms where children learn teamwork, effective communication, and leadership skills, which are pivotal for their holistic development.

多实少虚,说的是在写作时多用实在的词和例子,比如这段里,用的词中像valuable, teamwork, communication, leadership和pivotal这些都是很实在的词,而不是仅仅像good一样比较笼统,雅思作文很看重这一点,如果你的描述太虚或者太笼统了,乍一看用在什么题目里都可以,那自然是不行的。

再看句式,这一段里的句式很丰富,没有一味用高难度的语法,而是通过用丰富的句式让文本变得可读性强,且清晰明了。同学们写作的时候,要学会简单句和复杂句交替使用,不同的从句和语态也交替使用,不要通篇只知道用一种句法,这样的文章读起来会很降考官的好感。

一定留时间检查一遍

最后,小编强烈建议同学们平时写作练习的时候多多把握时间,争取给自己留个几分钟从头到尾读一遍自己的作文。

为什么这么说呢?我们埋头写作的时候可能会忽略一些很微小的细节,比如词汇拼写、语法问题,又或者一些大问题,比如逻辑等等,在我们投入写作时也有可能会忽略,这时候重读作文就能帮我们减少这些情况的发生。平时练习的时候,同学们就要有这个习惯,重读作文,并且发现自己的问题,及时记录总结,这样才能越写越好。

在考场上,即使时间紧张,同学们也给自己一点时间重读,纸考、机考的同学都是一样。这段时间里你要检查单词的拼写、语法以及整体文章的逻辑等等,为自己的作文做最后的保驾护航。同时小编要提醒,时间一到一定要立即停笔和停下打字,不然的话,这样算是作弊行为,小心你这次的成绩直接被取消啦!

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50组写作高分表达

看完以上内容,现在小编给你带来了50组写作中常用的高分表达,快拿出小本本记录下来吧~

-lt is high time that we put an end to the (trend)

-lt is time to take the advice of .. and to put special emphasis on theimprovement of...

-There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of...

-Obviously, . lf we want to do something... , it is essential that...

-Only in this way can we...

-lt must be realized that...

-This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First,...Second,...Third,...,Why did...? For one thing..., for another...Perhaps the primary reason is...

-l quite agree with the statement that...The reasons are chiefly as follows:

-People's views on .. vary from person to person. Some hold that ...However, others believe that...

-People may have different opinions on ...

-Attitudes towards...vary from person to person

-There are different opinions among people as to...

-Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure)

-As far as something is concerned, ...

-lt was obvious that...

-lt may be true that...but it doesn't mean that...

-lt is natural to believe that..., but we shouldn't ignore that...

-There is no evidence to suggest that...

-From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinionrather than the second.

-l cannot entirely agree with the idea that...

-Personally, l am standing on the side of...

-l sincerely believe that...

-In my opinion, it is more advisable to do ... than to do...

-Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why...

-Here are some suggestions for handling .

-The best way to solve the troubles is...

-People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.

-表示强调

still, indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly,interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway.above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly

-表示比较

like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally

-表示对比

by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead,but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas,unlike, yet, in contrast

-表示列举

for example, for instance, such as, take ..for example, except (for), to illustrate

-表示时间

later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the sametime, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in themeanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, assoon as, afterwards,temporarily, earlier, now, after a while

-表示顺序

first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last,next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important

-表示解释

in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms

-表示递进

What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover.furthermore, as well as, additionally, again

-表示让步

although, after all, in spite of., despite, even if, even though, though, admittedlywhatever may happen

-表示转折

however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately,whereas

-表示原因

for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to

-表示结果

as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as aconsequence

-表示总结

on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, toconclude, to summarize, in short

-其他连接句

mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly,commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, inthis case

-Recently, the problem of... has aroused people's concern

-lt is commonly believed that . / lt is a common belief that...

-Many people insist that...

-With the development of science and technology, more and morepeople believe that...

-A lot of people seem to think that .

-Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the chances are that ... will leadus in danger.

-No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that

-lt is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.

-Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to theconclusion that...

写作突破高分并不是易事,但是,如果我们把这几条规则牢记好,勤于练习,其实,写作高分也没有那么难拿下。所以,看完文章的你,就赶紧多多练习、早日拿下写作吧!专业的天津雅思秋季课程就选新航道雅思秋季班,天津新航道雅思秋季班火热招生中,走读班、VIP定制班、全封闭住宿班、线上班多种班型任您选择,现在报名立享优惠。

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