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Part 2高频《搬家/搬学校》的理由不如都从人来考虑

作者:  2021-10-28 10:59:09  阅读量:

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大家都知道雅思口语part 2话题主要分成:人物类-地点类-物品类-事件类话题。但在准备话题时,很多同学却不知道这几类话题内在的联系。

在我的教学过程中,人物类话题是我会先开始讲的部分。选择它的原因也是因为“人”是一切的基础。只有当你把人物类话题搞明白了,并清楚掌握所有与之相关的维度,你才能更好的完成其他的话题。同时,你也会发现“人”可以出现在基本所有的话题里,甚至成为你喜欢或不喜欢一个人或事主要的原因。

拿今天要讲的话题来举例—《搬家/搬学校》。

Describe a time when you moved to a new home/ school

You should say:

• When you moved

• Where you moved

• Why you moved

• And explain how you felt about it

不管是“Home”还是“School”, 它们都包含了人的元素。

和“home”有关的人包括:和你住在一起的人(家人/室友)、邻居、房东

和“school”有关的人包括:同学、教职工

为此,你是否喜欢这个地方就可能和这些人产生联系。

除了,“人”这个的理由外,你也可以拆分“home&school”相关的维度来获取更多的拓展点。

Home 维度拆分

location/ history/ popularity/ appearance (size/ color/ decoration/ material/ style/ shape)/ price/ who you live with/ how often you live there/ how long you have been living there/ neighbor/ real estate developer/ architect etc.

School 维度拆分

location/ history/ popularity/ staff/ students/ regulations/ tuition fee/ facility/ appearance (size/ color/ decoration/ material/ style/ shape)/ courses/ events etc.

以上维度,每一个都可以是你搬家换学校的理由,也可以是你对于新家以及新学校的感受来源。

接着我们就从每个小问题来具体分析这一整篇话题。

Where it is

针对这个问题有两种解题格式:

• 按具体时间点拓展

我们需要给出的信息包括:year-month-date-hour

以上信息不需要完整的给出,你可以有所挑选,要求是必须从大到小进行排列阐述。比如,我个人就喜欢给出“month-date-hour”的信息在我的回答里。

当我们在阐述“date”的时候,我们并不一定会记住具体的日子,但我们可以用抽象概念“星期几/天气/早中晚”来做进一步的说明。我非常推荐大家放大“天气”这一块的内容,天气会影响人的心情也会改变人的计划。为此,这也可以在你的回答里增加一些转折的内容。

当我们在阐述“hour”的时候,我们则可以用“before/after/while”来给出大概的时间范围。

Example:

Well, it took place about a month ago when I moved to a new home. I clearly remember it was a sunny morning. That day, I got up at the crack of dawn 早起. After having a short breakfast, I moved to my new apartment.

• 按【认知过程-目前结果】拓展

我们可以把问题转变成【when you started having idea to move home/ school】,为此,我们可以按“认知过程-目前结果”的答题框架来给出内容。

-我开始有这个想法是什么时候

-终什么时候成功实现

Example :

Well, it took place during high school.  I had really wanted to move to a new school but my parents wouldn't let me. But after I kept pestering them about it they finally gave in and I moved to a new school in my 2nd year.

Where you moved

此问题需要给出一定的和该“new home/school”相关的信息。可以包括:location/ history/ popularity/ fee等,相对较简单,同时又不会影响后续答题的小维度。

如果你只想拓展“Location”的话,你可以再具体说明它的“位置/相对位置/怎么过去(交通+花费时间)”。

Example one :

The new apartment is in the west of my city, a bit far from my workplace, but the rental fee is a fraction of the cost of my previous place so it has helped me financially. 

Example two:

The new high school was in the north of my city, a bit far from my home but very close to my grandparents’ home. Because of this, I moved in with them.

Why you moved

鉴于文章开始有说,的观点可以是因为“人”。可能是因为旧的家里有你不喜欢的人,也有可能新的家里有你喜欢的人。

Example one: 讨厌的邻居

Apart from the steep 过高的 rental fee, another reason why I moved was because of my horrible neighbors. They were all young people who loved having parties. They had one almost every night. The loud music and the noise drove me insane 把我逼疯. No matter how many times I told them to be quiet, they just ignored me. Because of this, I couldn’t stand it anymore and decided to move.

Example two: 能和朋友呆在一起

Actually there were so many reasons why I decided to move. Besides the low rental fee, another reason for me to move to my new apartment was I wanted to live near my friend who I have known for over 10 years.  I have always felt lonely in the city, so I knew moving close to her would make me feel better. Now she is my neighbor. Everyday we hang out and I think my life is much colorful than before.

Example three: 古板的老师

The reason why I decided to transfer was because I disliked the teachers there. They were all old-school and conservative. They never challenged us to think outside the box 跳脱常规思维. Because of this, I lacked motivation to study and dreaded 害怕 their classes. Then I persuaded my parents to let me change to an international high school in my city.

除此之外,其他维度都可以用来论述你搬家/学校的理由。比如:

-搬家是因为房子过于老旧,设施破烂,电梯经常坏,生活不方便;

-搬家是因为物业服务过烂,处理事情不积极,同时收费又很贵;

-换学校是因为学校管理过严,校规让人难以接受;

-换学校是因为学校没有特别多的活动,只是学习很无聊;

-换学校是因为学校的课程过于无聊,没有自己喜欢的;

-换学校是因为学校的饭很难吃,寝室又很烂。


04

How you felt about it

对于你对新家/新学校的感受,你无需一味的夸,你也可以说说你的不满。或者采取“让步”的形式来说明它的好跟不好。“虽然它存在怎样的问题,但我觉得它很不错...”或者“虽然它有哪些好的方面,但我还是挺失望的....”。

至于你满意以及失望的点,你依旧可以从“人”入手来思考。比如:

-遇到了新的邻居,他们很友好;

-新的邻居比之前的还不好;

-学校老师很专业,也很关心学生;

-学生不是很友好,甚至存在校园霸凌点现象;

-食堂阿姨非常热情,经常饭给的很多;

Example one:

Even though moving was exhausting and the new location added more commuting time 通勤时间 to my day, I still think it was worth it, because my life is much better now than before. I have met so many nice people who have helped me adapt to the new environment and look out for 照顾 me with their warmth. I think I am such a lucky person.

Example two:

To be honest, I was a little disappointed by the new school. At first, I thought the school was different from the previous one and the international teaching system would make the class entertaining. 

However, I was completely wrong. They had recruited 招募 many Chinese teachers who kept using the traditional way to teach us. Everyday I still had to memorize lots of meaningless things.  Because of this, I had another two horrible years in the new school.

4个小问题已讲解完毕,你知道你该怎么完成属于你的回答了么?

• When you moved

Well, it took place about a month ago when I moved to a new home. I clearly remember it was a sunny morning. That day, I got up at the crack of dawn. After having a short breakfast, I moved to my new apartment.

• Where you moved

The new apartment is in the west of my city, a bit far from my workplace, but the rental fee is a fraction of the cost of my previous place so it has helped me financially. 

• Why you moved

Apart from the steep rental fee, another reason why I moved was because of my horrible neighbors. They were all young people who loved having parties. They had one almost every night. The loud music and the noise drove me insane. No matter how many times I told them to be quiet, they just ignored me. Because of this, I couldn’t stand it anymore and decided to move.

• How you felt about it

Even though moving was exhausting and the new location added more commuting time to my day, I still think it was worth it, because my life is much better now than before. I have met so many nice people who have helped me adapt to the new environment and look out for me with their warmth. I think I am such a lucky person.



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