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类型：Discuss both views。

Discuss both views的文章在雅思考试中难度较大，是很多同学把"握不住"的题型。今天就以这篇范文为例，给大家梳理下正确的逻辑框架。

题目

Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training, while others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

译：

一些人认为像医生和工程师这样的专业人士应该被要求在他们接受培训的国家工作，而另一些人则认为他们应该自由地在另一个国家工作，如果他们愿意的话。

讨论这两种观点并给出你自己的观点。

写作框架

题头改写：

改写问题/陈述双方的观点

论文陈述和你的观点：技术工作者应该自由选择工作的国家

Some people argue that skiled individuals ought to work solely in the country where they received theireducation, whereas others sav that they have the right to freely decide where to work. in my view, skiledworkers should have the freedom to work in whichever nation they desire.

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主体1：

陈述一些人的想法(主题句)：技术人员应该在自己国家工作

详细解释(支持句，为什么)：政府资助了他们

观点：为什么你同意或不同意他们

举一个具体的例子：2019年，英国护士离开英国，政府招募移民弥补缺口

人们普遍认为对医生和工程师的培训费用昂贵，政府用纳税人的钱对其进行补贴。因此，他们认为有技能的人员应该只在本国工作，并将自己的技能贡献给国家。例如，2019年，英国政府花了大量纳税人的钱补贴护士，其中许多人离开英国去寻找其他机会。因此，政府不得不招募移民来弥补这一缺口。虽然这个问题需要解决，但我认为有技能的工人有权在自己希望的任何地方寻求就业。

主体2：

陈述别人的想法(主题句)：技术人员应该自由选择工作的国家

详细解释(支持句)：

阻止技术人员去其他地方工作是不公平的。

技术人员去其他国家也可以带动本国的经济发展

观点：为什么你同意或不同意他们

举一个具体的例子：斯里兰卡医生每年寄回数百万美元给他们的家人

有些人认为来自发展中国家的专业人士移民是因为缺乏机会，因此阻止他们迁徙是不公平的。我同意这种观点，因为如果人们对自己的工作不满意，或者无法赚到足够的钱维持生计，那么他们应该有选择去一个拥有更高薪水和更好生活的富裕国家的权利。此外，许多有技能的工人会把钱寄回贫穷国家的家人，这有助于促进他们祖国的经济。例如，西方国家的斯里兰卡医生每年会把数百万美元寄回家乡斯里兰卡，使他们能够购买基本的生活必需品，因为该国最近经历了经济危机。

结论：

重申你的观点

总而言之，尽管存在不同的看法，但我认为有能力的工人应该有机会到海外发展，抓住更好的机会，这也将有利于他们的祖国。

重点词汇

1.Solely 地

2.Received 收到

3.Whereas 鉴于

4.Subsidise 补助

5.Dedicate 奉献

6.Personnel 全体人员

7.Recruit 招募

8.make-up 组成

9.Shortfall 差额

10.Option 选项

11.Boosts 便利设施

12.Amenities 设施

13.it is widely believed tha 人们普遍认为

14.seek opportunities 寻找机会

15.this issue needs to be addressed 这个问题需要解决

16.make ends meet 收支相抵

17.take advantage of 利用

范文

开头段：

Some people argue that skilled individuals ought to work solely in the country where they received their education, whereas others say that they have the right to freely decide where to work. In my view, skilled workers should have the freedom to work in whichever nation they desire.

主体1：

On the one hand, it is widely believed that the training provided to doctors and engineers is expensive and governments subsidise this with taxpayer money. Therefore, they believe that skilled personnel ought to only work in their native country and dedicate their skills to the nation. For instance, in 2019 the UK government spent a large proportion of taxpayers' money to subsidise nurses, and many of those left the country to seek opportunities elsewhere. Thus, the government had to recruit immigrants to make-up for the shortfall. Although this issue needs to be addressed, I believe skilled workers have a right to seek employment wherever they wish.

主体2：

On the other hand, some would argue that professionals from developing countries emigrate due to a lack of opportunities, so it is unfair to prevent them from relocating. l agree because if people are unhappy in their job, or cannot earn enough to make ends meet, then they should have the option to move to a wealthier nation with a higher salary and better life. Moreover, many skilled workers send money back to their families in poorer nations, which boosts the economy of their native country. For example, Sri Lankan doctors in western countries send millions of dollars every year back to their families in Sri Lanka, enabling them to buy basic amenities since the country's recent economic crisis.

结论：

To conclude, despite differing views, l believe competent workers ought to have the chance to relocate overseas and take advantage of better opportunities, which will also benefit their native country.

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