9.23雅思考试已结束，不少同学反应：被一大早的听力直接干趴下了！不过，阅读部分相对简单，写作部分中规中矩。写作的小作文考了折线图，大作文考了观点类的议论文。

今天为大家带来本场雅思大作文高分范文及解析：

大作文题目

Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

极限运动如跳伞和滑雪是非常危险的，应该被禁止。你在多大程度上同意或不同意这种观点？

解题思路

通过审题可知，这篇雅思大作文需要我们写一篇观点类议论文，话题是极限运动非常危险，是否应该被禁止。我们在审题时一定要注意，题目谈的是极限运动非常危险，因此应该被禁止，我们可以讨论这种因果关系是否是成立的。如果我们持反对的意见，在写作时只要给出恰当的理由就可。

高分范文

Extreme sports such as sky diving and rock climbing are becoming increasingly popular, but there are strong objections calling for their ban. In my opinion, despite the potential fatal dangers involved, these sports should not be prohibited as they are also fun and can be participated in responsibly.

评析：第 一段作者同义改写大作文题目，并给出自己的观点。

Many people demand limits on extreme sports because they are prone to causing injury and death. Take for example one of the most notorious extreme sports: base jumping. In this sport, participants jump off a fixed point, such as a cliff or building, using a parachute. As there is very little time before they hit the ground,unforeseen parachute malfunctions are possible and the fatality rate is extremely high. Those that do not die may suffer severe debilitating injuries such as paralysis and brain damage. Base jumping is something of an outlier among dangerous sports, but all these sports involve varying degrees of danger.

评析：第二段作者谈及禁止极限运动的原因，并给出了理由和列举了相关的例子。

From my point of view,despite the aforementioned concerns,if people are cautious in extreme sports, the fun they gain still outweighs the potential harm. Base jumping is the most perilous extreme sport, but other sports such as skiing, deep-sea diving, and rock climbing are relatively safe. Rock climbing is a good example of a sport that can be very safe and enjoyable if proper precautions are taken. Participants should enroll in training and go with someone who knows how to safely assemble the harness and tie the required knots. Many people who try it end up becoming passionate rock climbers because it is an exhilarating experience. Therefore, most extreme sports, if taken seriously, present little real danger and are an enjoyable pastime.

评析：第三段作者详细陈述了自己的观点，给出了自己观点的理由，并举例。

Overall, extreme sports are fun and not necessarily particularly dangerous, so we should not let fear of possible harm prevent us from trying them. Instead, we should seize the opportunity to responsibly try at least one extreme sport to see if it is to our liking.

评析：最后一段作者再次陈述自己的观点，深化文章主旨。

相关表达

词汇

1. increasingly 不断增加地

2. objections 反对

3. call for 呼吁

4. fatal dangers 致命的危险

5. prohibit 禁止

6. participate in 参加

7. demand 要求

8. are prone to 容易……

9. notorious 臭名昭著的

10. base jumping 定点跳伞

11. cliff 悬崖

12. parachute 降落伞

13. malfunctions 故障

14. fatality rate 死亡率

15. debilitating 使衰弱的

16. paralysis 瘫痪

17. outlier 异类

18. aforementioned 上述的

19. perilous 危险的

20. precautions 预防措施

21. assemble 组装

22. exhilarating 令人兴奋的

23. seize the opportunity 抓住机会

极限跳伞小知识

极限跳伞（sky diving）是欧美最流行的空中极限运动，它的独特魅力在于跳伞者可以从正在飞行的各种飞行器上跳下，也可以从固定在高处的器械、陡峭的山顶、高地甚至建筑物上纵身而下，并且通常起跳后伞并不是马上自动打开，而是由跳伞者自己控制开伞时间，这样冒险者就可以把刺激域值的大小完全控制在自己手中。

跳伞运动已成为年轻人最时髦的极限运动之一，象翱翔的雄鹰一样，从几千米，甚至上万米高天空俯冲下来，很难想象出还有哪一种比跳伞更刺激的娱乐了。