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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

These days, children spend more time on doing homework or participating in organized activities related to school or sports. However, they should be given more time to do whatever they want.

破题

这算是一道比较老的题，在2015.7.12和2019.11.10都有考过。这道题难度一般，相对于上周的超长三选一题，算是ETS爸爸放了一马。

审题的时候，大家注意下里面的一些限制条件，比如children, whatever they want，所以这里专注的场景是小孩子（中小学生，所以就不要写大学生等），以及最后更多的时间是任意做任何想做的（就不要写父母安排他们做家务等）。

头脑风暴

一、应该给更多的时间做自己想做的

① 给出自主选择，能建立更好的家庭氛围。

② 给出自主选择，能找到孩子真心兴趣所在。

③ 给出自主选择，可以让孩子放松。

④ 给出自主选择，可以让他们自主思考。

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二、不应该

① 做任何想做的可能风险太大（沉迷游戏，学坏等）

② 太多的free time可能会让他们任性

③ 太多的free time可能会影响他们的学业时间

参考思路

立场：should

1. First, leaving some time for children to freely explore releases their pressure and brings more happiness into life. For one thing, free time can be used to play for fun. Today’s kids are busier than ever with jam-packed schedules, participating in numerous extracurricular activities including track, basketball, chorus, or even gymnastics.（写作营Day1语料） Therefore, if some unstructured time could be given to them, 他们就可以发发呆，和朋友玩，或者任何什么让他们觉得开心的事情, which would be a huge mental benefit in the long run.// For another, sparing a chunk of time allows kids to develop hobbies, sparkling their day. For example, my niece who is currently 7 years old 每天都有很多功课要做。但虽然如此，我每次看到她都发现she is in a really healthy mood. 她就告诉我是因为on every single day, her mom allows her to do whatever she would like for two hours, so she always uses this to draw or paint her beloved Elsa.

2. Second, children need some time to think through some issues. This is because their life is not only hustle and bustle, but also full of challenges and obstacles, like increase in homework complexities, friendship issues, pressure to excel in competitions, and so on. 如果他们只是sprint from one task to another, 那他们将没有时间真正思考如何解决和面对这些问题。I still remember when I was about to graduate from primary school, that my grades are not being high enough, especially the one in math, is a bit of bummer to me. 那时我时常都会每天放学后自己多呆一段时间思考这个问题，pondering the way to solve and the meaning of being a top student to me最终…

3. Admittedly, too much time left for children to decide would have some side-effects. For instance, 有些小孩可能会全部用来玩游戏，沉迷其中。However, as long as the time has been set and agreed by all the family members- supervisors and kids, then a little bit fun will not yield any harm.（让步转折段一定要记得转折！）

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